Has your fundraising and member acquisition efforts fallen into a routine? Are you essentially sending out the same stuff over and over to your direct mail list and email list?

What are you testing in your fundraising “lab”?

There’s an aspect of repetition that’s fine: When you have a control … use it.

On the other hand, even a smooth running engine needs tuning and adjusting on a regular basis.

That’s why you do regular testing on your fundraising communications.

In fact, direct response marketing demands on-going testing. That’s part of the secret. That’s why testing is fundamental to your fundraising.

What to test

• Outer envelope. First step is to get it opened so the letter can be read. Test a different image, color versus black and white, full envelope design, plain envelope, teaser and no teaser, and possibly special faux envelopes for true emergencies. Also test using a different size of carrier envelope.

• Add a lift note or buck slip. Often times this one simple change can do the trick. Related variations are to add a post-it note or a handwritten note on the letter.

• New copy or a variation of the copy. This ranges from a completely new letter to a new headline and lead. It can even include testing a shorter letter along the same lines, or adding more detail for a longer letter. Do NOT assume that just because you never read a longer letter that no one else does. Many incredible, long-standing controls are longer letters. Find out what works best for your fundraising campaigns.

• Drop the brochure. Especially in acquisition, a brochure or other enclosure usually depresses response. Yet within some niches (e.g., arts and culture), they often work well. In any event, it is easy to test. And of course you can also test a totally different approach to your brochure.

• Make me a better offer. First off, be sure to ASK. I’ve read many a letter where they never ask me to donate or do anything else. Make it CLEAR what you want your readers to do. Oh, and also make it clear what they get for joining or making a donation. Next find a way to strengthen your offer. Add an interactive device. Tie the offer to an online poll they can easily respond to. If you use freemiums or premiums test variations of them.

• Add urgency. Whenever possible find a way to add a deadline. Give readers a good reason to respond as soon as possible. And explain the consequences if they don’t. Do they lose out on something? Does another person get diagnosed with a disease with no hope for a cure? Does another nonprofit close their doors because your foundation ran out of grant money – and who else is hurt when they close their doors? Deadline and impact. Spell it out.

• New reply device. When was the last time you overhauled your reply device? Many people glance at that first to get the gist of what you’re asking. If it looks okay, then they start on the letter (and the starting point is usually the P.S.). Some donate without reading. Can your reply device do the job solo?

• Add a coin to a package. Use a price point to tie the coin to the letter copy.

• Use handwriting (actual or QUALITY simulated) on the OSE; or inside on the letter. But I have a strong preference for “real” handwriting.

• Use a live stamp on the carrier envelope. Consider going first class.

• Gift amounts and gift strings. When was the last time to tested variations of these?

• Signer of the letter or email.

• Email subject line. More ideas on subject lines here.

• When a letter or email is sent. Timing is everything, as the saying goes. Email can get down to the day of the week and the time of day. It’s also impacted by the time zone of the recipient.

• Flexible payment terms. An association could test this for membership dues.

Those are at least 15 ideas on what you can test to nudge a higher response rate or a higher average gift value out of your marketing and fundraising campaigns. And even a fraction of a percent increase can add up to an impressive amount on your bottom line.

And don’t try to test too much at once. When you vary multiple elements you’re never quite sure which change did the trick (or conversely, which change hurt response). Have a control and send it out to a statistically significant portion of your file. Then send the test version to the other file segment.

Keep your fundraising and marketing machine well-tuned. Keep testing.

What has worked best for you when testing your direct response appeals?

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Too many nonprofits are afraid to be different. They get so hung up about being “professional” that they forget about being human. And I find that quite ironic for a charity.

In your copy – the words within your direct mail letters, emails, text messages, newsletters, press releases, case studies, social media updates, etc. – you must sound like a human. And you must also stand out from the crowd.

Sometimes I feel like I harp on this topic to the point of nausea. If you’re already a master at writing this way – sorry to bug you once again. On the other hand, if you’re like the vast majority – please study this post carefully and be willing to change.

Jeff Bullas recently shared seven tips to finding “your” writing voice. And that’s what prompted me to write about this topic once again.

Here are his 7 tips with my twist added to make them more relevant for fundraising copywriting:

1 – Show your personality

When representing your charity (or association), you might not have as much leeway in letting your personality shine through as an individual does. Nonetheless, it’s important for the signer of your letters and emails to push the envelope a bit. If you’re dull and boring and sound like an institution spouting the same ole’ message . . . how can that possibly inspire anyone to donate?

2 – Display your humor

Why not? Have a bit of fun. Especially within social media. Although I admit you have to be careful with humor. Perhaps you can gently introduce it by relating what your nonprofit does to a popular movie comedy; using a movie to make a point in a fun way. Or have someone create a warm cartoon. Get creative.

3 – Put yourself in your audience’s shoes

This is HUGE for charities and associations! One way to do this is to use the Stanislavsky method. Think like a donor. And the longer you’ve been working at your charity, the harder this is to do.

4 – Expose your imperfections

Nobody’s perfect. This includes your nonprofit. When you make a mistake; fess up to it right away.

Another way of looking at this is that the stories related to your organization are full of drama. They’re full of life’s bumps, scrapes and scratches. Expose that in your copy.

5 – Reveal your passion

I like how Bullas says it: “Allowing the passion that drives you to radiate and express your ideas and creativity will allow the genius that is you to shine. Passion is not a singular word but a synergy of interests, skills and focus that is wrangled and woven together. Put passion on display.”

I also wrote about this not too long ago in my blog, Six Principles of Great Nonprofit Content (see Principle #5).

6 – Tell your stories

If it’s appropriate to share part of your personal story … please do so. Any specifics on why you’re so passionate about the mission, why you work there, and so forth all add up to a much stronger connection with your readers – the donors and/or members. You become real. You have struggles just like them.

In any case you also need to master the art of nonprofit storytelling as you share stories about your mission and the people you help.

7 – Develop brand “you”

Here the focus is clearly on your nonprofit’s brand (as opposed to your personal brand), yet don’t forget the previous six tips. Your nonprofit brand ought to be something you can summarize in a key phrase or two; a simple sentence. And when I say simple … I mean simple. This automatically eliminates your mission statement.

As Bullas says in his post, “This is more an art than a science, but it’s worth a try.”

Skillfully incorporate all seven tips into your nonprofit copywriting and you’ll sound human. You’ll stand out from the crowd. Donors will be more inclined to support your cause. You’ll help more people.

More related posts:

It’s “Us” or “Them” – Writing reader-centric copy

Bore your nonprofit readers – 11 common copywriting mistakes

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